Revived to My Old Self – #tanka

Raw image of you
Young as when the earth was new
An original
A breath of you restores me
Rejuvenates me to youth

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This was written for Colleen’s Weekly Poetry Challenge.  The key words today were “Renew” and “Fresh”.  Following her suggestion, I didn’t use the words, I used only synonyms.

13 thoughts on “Revived to My Old Self – #tanka

  1. Pingback: Tanka Tuesday Poetry Challenge Recap No. 74: Renew & Fresh #SynonymnsOnly | colleenchesebro.com

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