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Twiddling. That’s what Pops called it. Eyes and fingers all a twitching. Always just sitting there, but never just sitting. Running a thousand miles an hour without moving.
Brian done come home from the war a changed man. Everybody saw it. Debby packed up and headed home on day one. On day two Brian was back home with Pops.
Didn’t work. Nuttin. Just sat there, twitching. Twiddling.
Until Pops said he was cutting down the old Sycamore.
Brian was up all night, makeshift spots on the tree, Pops’ wood-working tools in hand. Nobody knew what to make of it.
Twiddling.
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Word count = 100
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I saw implements of war in the carving – helmet, stone battle axes from different cultures, etc. I thought about the artistry of making the carving. But I ran out of words before I could get it all in there. Oh well, that’s what Friday Fictioneers is about ;)
Art is cathartic. It definitely was for me.
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I agree. I think people are seeing more and more benefits to art therapy for people who have had some major trauma, like the ex-soldier in this story. But I think everyone should try their hand and create something, express themselves.
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Very pleased for Brian.
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It is great he found an outlet, a way to express himself.
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I think twiddling was the perfect choice of word. And pops may not have known that he was going to help Brian with his… Really nice take and I think you used your 100 words wisely.
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Thanks, Dale. I think Pop’s and the others had pretty much given up on Brian, yet when he got the chance express himself….
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Indeed!!
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I do trauma counseling, and have worked with several veterans. Art therapy is helpful. This is a new twist on that idea, though. I love your story.
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Thanks. I’m sure trauma counseling is tough work, but very gratifying when you see someone make progress. That was part of my thought process here, that be expressing himself creatively Brian was able to take a first step on his road to recovery.
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The hundred word limit is always a challenge. Maybe the tree turned out to be a bit of therapy for Brian and will help get him moving again. Nicely written story!
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100 words is always a challenge, but I feel it more sometimes more than others ;) That was my idea – Brian found a way to express himself and the pain he felt from the war, and so bringing out this artistic side in him is bit of therapy, beginning his recovery process.
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There needs to be more support for our service men and women and above all understanding for what they have been through. a beautiful piece.
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There does need to be more support. Too many fall through the cracks.
Thanks.
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Brian really liked the tree. May be it should not be chopped.
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Brian did like the tree, but this sparked something inside of him and allowed him to express that which was able to with words. He was able to take action with his hands and possibly release some of the “demons” that had been dragging him down. This can be thought of as a first step on his path to healing.
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Twiddling and whittling–love that combination of words in your comment!
At first i thought perhaps a wartime head injury had caused this man to lose his wife and his independence, especially with the perseverating, or repetitive, movements that twiddling seemed to suggest. But you clarified it was PTSD in the comments.
Either way, your piece speaks to the power of art therapy, a cause near and dear to my heart. I think it is being implemented across the US by various organizations, to help many veterans who have trouble adjusting or who carry the war with them. Also, a timely veterans day piece!
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Truthfully, I had thought both PTSD and a head injury. As you said, it works either way. I know there are a lot of creative ways they are trying to heal soldiers, including arts and crafts. I’m with you, it is a great way to help those soldiers readjust to “normal” life.
I knew they 11th was coming up, but I wasn’t thinking about it when I wrote this. Or maybe my subconscious was… Now that you point it out, I will now call it a very small tribute to Veterans Day.
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I’m glad he found an outlet, hopefully it will help him.
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I think the creative outlet will help a lot. Give him a way to express himself.
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I agree about the words – I had a few more things to say but that 100 had me “carve” a bit more – and as you note – that is what it is all about.
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I like the culture rich vibe you give with the casual language.
I did get the full message without your author note –
and I sometimes see the word “brain” with “Brian” (that “top-down mental processing”) and so it worked well as you explored the idea of mental change and all that went on for Brian.
well done
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Thanks Y. I usually put in a name that seems to fit the story and perhaps my mind came up with “Brian” for that very reason – I am slightly dyslexic and often do see Brian as brain….
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yes –
brain
brian
brain
brian
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rbian
nbari
abrai
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I guess I could have named him N-Bari ;)
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oh I like that – has a stately feel with the N like that –
muy bueno
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I sensed this was going to be therapy for him as well as a discovery of his own amazing talent..
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Yes, that’s the way I see it. Using his talent to express himself and hopefully help his PTSD.
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It’s a great take on the prompt Trent.
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Thanks
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Great story, Trent. As usual. Love your stuff. 🙂
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Thanks!
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If that’s how he channels and processes what he has been through, I say more power to him.
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Yes, I agree. Let him work it out with his hands on wood and art.
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Twiddling is beautiful.
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It can be, and Brian’s twiddling and whittling with the carving tools in this story is beautiful.
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:)
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A sad portrait of a man damaged by war… but the comment from Pops about cutting the tree down has sparked his interest and fired his imagination. A hopeful sign, perhaps.
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Perhaps finding his voice in the wood he can use the art to work his way out of his PTSD.
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An intriguing piece. Nice one.
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Thanks
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I like the depth of this story
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Thanks.
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Nice character sketch
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Thanks, Neil.
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Dear Trent,
I’m not sure, but it seems that twiddling has a two different meanings in this story. War can definitely change a person. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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I think twiddling” can have different meanings in the story, but at the end it is more a sarcastic statement (ironic statement?) where the narrator takes the insult about doing nothing and recognizes the artistic genius behind it. War sure can change a person. Thanks!
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