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Yeah, Ma, things have really changed since I’ve been here. These cruise ships now are larger than major cities and are filled with phone-zombies. You know the type. Surrounded by beauty and all they see is a screen. Occasionally they’ll take selfies with their phones, but other than that it is all texts, Twitter, Twatter, and Whatnot.
Everybody is constantly on their mobiles, and I mean everybody.
Wait a minute Ma, someone is shouting at me.
Sorry, gotta go. I was climbing a tree to get a tourist some coconuts when I called. Yeah, I’ll post the coconuts on Instagram.
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Word count = 100
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Good story, Trent. It seems he’s become a phone zombie and doesn’t even realize it yet. Well written. :) — Suzanne
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Do people ever realize that they’re zombies, phone-zombie or otherwise? Thanks :)
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They might not realize or realize but not care. :) — Suzanne
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Yes, that is true.
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Ha. Love them or hate them, I think we’re stuck with our devices. A fun story.
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Yeah, they’re ubiquitous and will be for the foreseeable future. Thanks.
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Boy, that’s the pot calling the kettle black.
Good one, Trent.
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A little lacking in self-awareness there… Thanks.
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So true, the twatter never ends.
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No, the twatter goes ever on when those mobiles are around…
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Nice post! I miss Friday Fictioneers and I need to get back to it. I have the summer off, so that helps!
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Thanks! FF is a great exercise – I hope you get back into it.
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LOL, this was fun. It’s always the others who are crazy.
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Thanks :)
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Nicely done Trent and great pic. And very easy to imagine too 🙂
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Thanks – I think we’ve all seen those “phone-zombies” in paradise, but I’m guessing that there is no cell service in the great Outback…
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You’d be surprised Trent, though it depends how far “outback” you go.
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Very topical points, nicely told.
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Thanks. i always found it funny how much people are absorbed in their devices instead of their surroundings. Well, funny until I find myself doing it ;)
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He seems to be happy in his new job on the cruise ship.
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he still has his old job entertaining guests at the island resort, he was just making a social commentary about the new tourists who arrive on the huge cruise ships, but then, it turns out, he was being a hypocrite because he was acting just like them….
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LOL! Loved your take on the pic….and we cruise a lot so I easily visualized things.
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Thanks! I always laugh when I see people in the most beautiful places imaginable looking at their phones, but then when I catch myself doing it… ;)
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great humor!
and love the “ma”
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Thanks, Y!
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Da nada T
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It seems no-one is immune!
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Nope, you look around and everyone has one…
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A tale of our times – if you can’t beat them join them!
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And those little masters of our lives we all carry seem to call out to be used constantly…
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That’s the trouble when you point… one finger is out there, three are back at you!
We are almost all victims. I mean culprits!
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It is amazing how often that double edged sword of hypocrisy cuts us ;)
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So very true.
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What a perfect ending. From young to old they have smartphones. :-)
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Thanks, Tessa. I always find it odd when I’m in a wonderful place and people are looking at their phones instead of experiencing life.
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I occasionally might get talking on mine, but I am not walking and looking at the screen. I have unlimited data, but they make out on me now. Before I got my own WiFi I used the hotspot and the regular data way over my limits which only occasionally slowed me down. I didn’t drop down my data since I get a discount from my Fios Internet and TV for having the unlimited and it wouldn’t save me enough to be worth dropping it so if I do get stuck using it somewhere it isn’t something to worry about.
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Lol 💜
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Maybe too much realism ;)
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Yes indeed we are all salves to the dreaded mobile!
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Yes we are. I try to leave mine behind when I can, but it is hard! It calls to me ;)
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Lol 💜
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At least I’ve dodged (mostly) the “smartphone” tarpit. But sadly, not the computer or Kindle tarpit!
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I do use my smart phone more than I should, but far less than most I know! I hate, hate, hate Twitter, yet UI know people on it all day reading political rants. Oh well, I am addicted to my computer..
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Good one!
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Thanks!
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True, funny, and entertaining, Trent.
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Thanks.
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You’re welcome.
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I think he’s being a hypocrite … haha. Creative story!
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As soon as he types “hy” on his phone, it suggests “Hypocrite” ;) Thanks.
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Great story, Trent. I really liked it. It made me chuckle. He’s talking about other people using social media and he’s planning to post photos of coconuts on Instagram! He’s the pot all right…
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Yes, I think his cell phone can auto-fill in hypocrite after three letters ;) Thanks.
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Pot. Kettle. Black.
Said the woman who always posts pictures to Facebook.
:-)
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Yes, I could have named the story “Of Pots and Kettles” and had it work. It is a thing with this age we live in, and since we all live here…
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Yes, people who live in grass houses shouldn’t stow thrones…
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This is brilliant, Trent.
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Thanks, Robbie :)
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Very funny. A good example of not seeing ourselves as others see us.
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Thanks. People do seem to pick things up quicker in others than in themselves…
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Great capture our the times we live in.
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Thanks. Of course it would have been even more about our times if I had written it with my cell phone instead of my computer ;)
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What???? You used an old fashioned PC..shame on you :-)
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Yep, a big old fashioned energy hog of a PC ;)
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Ha ha – that was cleverly done, Trent! I wasn’t expecting that ending.
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Thanks, Susan!
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Good one, specially the end
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Thanks.
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You’re welcome Trent.
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Ha, I loved the idea of ‘Twatter’! Nice misdirection too, gave me a chuckle :-)
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I was writing the way I thought he’d talk before realizing that “Twatter” could have obscene connotations.. I still had to keep it ;) Thanks.
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It’s the obscenity that makes it work ;-)
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lol, yep
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Dear Trent,
So true. One finger pointed while the other fingers are busy texting. Good one.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Exactly – I wonder how many letters he has to put in before the phone auto-corrects it to “hypocrite” ;) Thanks.
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Love the picture; love your narrative to accompany it!
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It is a fun photo – I’m expecting a lot of great FF this week. Thanks!
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:) Funny story, Trent. I liked it.
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Thanks, Chelsea :)
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