
PHOTO PROMPT © Rochelle Wisoff-Fields
I looked at my watch. Had it stopped? I shook it then held it to my ear, a habit from another era.
Nothing.
The other people looked as uncomfortable as I felt. How long were we going to be delayed?
I stood and stretched, but really couldn’t go anywhere. My bags were too heavy to lug around the airport and I didn’t dare leave them unattended – that warning voice sounded dour.
Should I try reading again?
It was no use.
I walked to the counter and asked when we depart.
“Depart? You’re at your destination.”
I then noticed her horns.
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Word count = 100
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Such a twist!
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Waiting in airports can be hell….
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Perfect twist!!!!
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Thanks!
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Devil horns! Who’s been a naughty boy?
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He must have been some naughty to be sent to such an awful hell!
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Nooooooooo another hellish transport hub!
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This is excellent! The angst and anxiety of waiting on flights is real and certainly a kind of torment. Nicely done! =)
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Time seems to stop when waiting for a delayed airplane – I think it would be hell if it were delayed indefinitely or infinitely ;) Thanks!
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Most assuredly!!!
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Brilliant. Subtle little touches reveal where he is, but not until you get to the end. Love it.
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Thanks.
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So you are in hell! Is it literally or a feeling due to prolonged stay at the airport?
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Sometimes prolonged stays at an airport do feel like hell, but in this case it is literally hell.
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Haha, what a way to spend your afterlife :-)
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Yeah, he must have done something totally awful in life to deserve that fate!
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Yes, I’ve met airport employees who are only just missing a pair of horns.
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I’ve bumped into a few them myself….
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Uh oh. I’d certainly hate to hear that. A good story, Trent. :) — Suzanne
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Waits are always more tolerable when the end is in sight. If it is never going to end… Thanks.
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Too much time in an airport is the equivalent of hell, indeed!
Well done!
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It can be hell… Thanks!
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Oh, I loved this. I didn’t see that coming LOL!
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Thanks, Tessa. Waiting in airports can be Hell ;)
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I haven’t spent much time in them.
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Airport lounges and purgatory – I can see the connection!
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Yeah, I guess in real life they are usually closer to purgatory than hell, but if you were stuck there forever with no planes leaving for eternity….. ;)
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Absolutely brilliant 💜
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Thanks, Willow!
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💜💜
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This is a great one Trent ! I was once stuck at the airport outside Reykjavik for 3 days due to a snowstorm..and they ran out off coffee, so people started to get slightly irritated. Food was rationed. It wasn’t safe to leave the airport, and they didn’t know for how long we were going to be stuck there. After 3 days they put us on a plane to Denmark.
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Ack! Either the worst dream ever — or a living hell. Your story went from calm but frustrated to sheer horror. Good one.
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I was think more along the lines of a “dead hell”, i.e., The Hell ;) Sometimes being stuck in an airport does feel like hell, so…. Thanks.
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I was too (thinking of The Hell) if he wasn’t just having a bad dream. You are welcome :)
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Ha! I once had the experience of a flight being delayed for 6 incremental hours (ya know, half-hour, then another hour, then two more, then radio silence, then who knows …). It was late fall. One of the parents, who had two little ones to LITERALLY after, finally pulled out something from her carry on, which her preschooler put on delightedly: His ‘little devil” costume, perhaps left over from Halloween. “Feels like hell anyway,” she muttered. Everyone laughed.
To this day I think that naming it helped move the energies .. .because shortly after we boarded … :)
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Moving it back by increments is the worst… That story is so funny. She was obviously the most clever person around. You may be right, naming it might have moved the energies.
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Well, I’d at least like to THINK it was what moved the energies. … ;) I was of half a mind to get a little devil-headgear for emergencies … ;)
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Not a bad idea ;)
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:)
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Nice one, Trent! Your last line made me smile.
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Sometimes I think those people at the gates do have horns, but maybe not quite as literally as in this case ;) Thanks.
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Thank goodness for airport lounges! Time goes faster there and there’s not a horn in sight!
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Maybe eternity in an airport lounge wouldn’t be so bad….
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Not a bright future. All too familiar with 3 hour layovers. They can be pure hell.
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I agree, three hour layover can be hell – this guy must have done something awful to have to wait forever….
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Yeah, pretty much. That would be a good description of hell, especially if you had no money to get food and nothing to read.
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Can’t go into the bathrooms because, well, what would you do with all of the luggage? Yes, total hell….
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A great story, Trent.
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Thanks, Robbie!
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Ouch … welcome to the Gates of Hell. … FYI: Concert returns this weekend … Elton … Saturday 1 AM stage time.
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“Gates of Hell” – exactly. I will try to the Elton John concert early to post my favorite, but will most likely not be able to listen to everything this week, unless it is raining – it’s summer, I need to be outside :)
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Summer it is … thus why I will probably only do 2 concerts a month … We’ve seen our share of rain! Actually 11+ inches over for the year to date … that was 4-5 days ago and we’ve had 5+ inches since then!
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Yeah, it has been awful rain-wise here as well. I have been seeing a lot of memes on FaceBook from my Ohio friends about the rain, like someone asking Noah where the ark was and him answering “Ohio”. Speaking of that, I will be in the state in early July, but up in the Cleveland area. I hope the rain ends by then….
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Let’s hope it ends by then! (even though the next 5 days still have storms in the forecast). … YUK!!!!
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Yeah, we have rain in the forecast for the rest of the week as well, but today is beautiful… so far…
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We had a storm yesterday evening … figure we got 2 inches of rain in an hour! … Pleasant now – but who knows about this afternoon.
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Whoa!
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Sometimes a three hour layover seems like eternity – I think an airport for ever would qualify for Hell ;)
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Aaaagh! To late to run! Good one :)
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Yeah, the main character must have done something totally awful to have this as his private Hell! Thanks.
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Dear Trent,
It would be hell to spend eternity in an airport. Love this. Subtly captured.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Nice!
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Thanks!
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Hell is a permanent departure gate!
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I can think of few places worse to spend eternity….
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Ha! Perfect.
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Waiting is just Hell… ;) Thanks.
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I like all your subtleties, too. Given more words, I’m sure you would have also had the temperature go up…
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The people were so uncomfortable because the air conditioning didn’t seem to be working – couldn’t quite fit it in ;)
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Ah. I can see that now. When I read the last line I saw that you were adding discomfort little by little as the story unfolded.
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