The Space Between #Etheree

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Image by S. Hermann & F. Richter from Pixabay

Thoughts
Ideas
Bottled up
Contained inside
Waiting for release
On an infinite sea
Drifting on random currents
Between far away island shores
Forever self-contained but unheard
And yet we are so close to almost touch

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Written for Colleen’s Poetry Challenge. Colleen has changed her challenge to include photos as well as keywords. This is a photo week (see photo at the top of the page). For this week’s challenge I decided to do an Etheree.

12 thoughts on “The Space Between #Etheree”

Miriam Hurdle August 20, 2019 at 11:28 pm

Very well done, Trent!

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1. trentpmcd Post authorAugust 21, 2019 at 7:13 am
  
  Thanks, Miriam!
  
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  1. Miriam Hurdle August 21, 2019 at 1:17 pm
    
    You’re welcome, Trent!
    
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willowdot21 August 20, 2019 at 4:49 pm

Truly perfect Trent💜

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1. trentpmcd Post authorAugust 20, 2019 at 5:30 pm
  
  Thanks, Willow :)
  
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  1. willowdot21 August 20, 2019 at 6:05 pm
    
    A pleasure Trent 💜
    
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Fleur McMorrow August 20, 2019 at 2:05 pm

Oh gosh….falling in love with every line, feeling the tide pull me out to sea…

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1. trentpmcd Post authorAugust 20, 2019 at 3:18 pm
  
  Thanks
  
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  1. Fleur McMorrow August 20, 2019 at 4:10 pm
    
    Most welcome.
    
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Colleen Chesebro August 20, 2019 at 1:00 pm

Well done, Trent! I really like the reference to feelings bottled up – self-contained. And, the last line! WOW!! <3

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1. trentpmcd Post authorAugust 20, 2019 at 1:06 pm
  
  Thanks, Colleen! The space between people rarely has anything to do with how far they are physically apart….
  
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  1. Colleen Chesebro August 20, 2019 at 1:18 pm
    
    So true. It’s always what’s left unsaid that is most interesting.
    
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