Me
Alone
Late at night
I hear a noise
Is she following?
I feel the clammy cold
The clods from her barren grave
I turn and she is just right there
Vacuous eyes staring coldly at me
Dripping rotting flesh as she approaches
Backing away from her I trip and fall
I see the blood of her last victim
She fills the volume before me
Flesh dripping arm reaches out
She touches my shoulder
Her cold dead finger
“Tag, you are it”
She giggles
I’m it
Hide!
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This was written for Colleen’s weekly poetry challenge. She gave two key words, Empty and Space, and we needed to use synonyms of those words. I did a double ethree this week.
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I Photoshoped a painting for a story I once wrote. This is an iteration of the painting that I did not originally use (I just added it). (I originally did the painting for a portrait class – she is pretty in the original ;).)
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Late edit – I just added an animation of the original picture…
Reblogged this on Where Genres Collide Traci Kenworth YA Author & Book Blogger for all Genres as well as craft books and commented:
Like this Halloween feel to this!
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Thanks :)
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You’re welcome, Trent!
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lol, the creepy animation fun :)
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Thanks :)
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NP :)
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Your poems gave me chills all over the place, Trent! The imagery in your double Etheree is palpable. I love the twist at the end. He, he. I don’t know what that painting looked like before, but it’s horrifying. :D xo
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The living dead need to play these types of games to keep in practice for when they go after the living-living ;) Thanks, Vashti! The painting was certainly a lot nicer originally than what I posted here ;) And not quite like the animation at the bottom….
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Good to know. Ha, ha.
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the changing picture at the end was crazy creepy and cool and well done.
great poem
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I was originally going to put the photo up in the coffee post, but then I thought about it and decided there are some readers who may not like being creeped out while reading a coffee post ;) Thanks, Y.
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:) that was nice of you to consider that
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Great poem, and really creepy animation! So cool!
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Thanks! I’ve done animations before, but this was one of my first tries making one into a gif. I’ll share it a little more widely closer to Halloween.
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It’s really a neat morph. Hubby says “Creepy!”. :)
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Oh WOW!! I love it, Trent! Your animation is awesome. Well done! <3
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I don’t know why, but a lot of comments have gone to spam! Anyway, just found this – Thanks Colleen! I’ll do a post of just the animation some day :)
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I’ve had the same issue, Trent. No worries. WP gremlins. :D
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The WP gremlins are worse than usual – of 70 spam comments, 10 were legit! Usually 1 or even none, but 10? Plus 7 comments in pending from people I have already approved. Oh well, WP is quite perfect, is it?
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I know. I had that problem last week. What a fiasco!
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Yeah, it looks like it’s been mostly the last week or so, so WP must have done it to every one!
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What a mess. Before the business plan switch over I had a 100 spam a day. Now, hardly any.
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Awesome etheree and picture. The animation really brought it to life! 😜
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Thanks Eloise. I’m an urban fantasy/horror writer, that’s what I do – bring the dead to life ;) Unfortunately I didn’t publish The Fireborn until 2017, so saying “Bringing the dead to life since 2017” doesn’t sound impressive ;)
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Hahaha! It’s still good!
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A very creepy poem, Trent, and that animated picture is really scary. Well done.
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Thanks Robbie. The animation did come out better than expected. I may make a couple of changes and swap it out – I want my signature in there in case someone steals it ;)
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Good idea
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OK, I posted about 4 different versions, but I think this is the last/best one :)
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I have seen this painting before, but that animation – Wow!
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lol! Good one Trent! And I thought that the painting looked somehow familiar. But creepy here! :) Well done!
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Thanks, Penny. Yeah, I used the painting before.
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Ah, man. I think I was hoping for no twist. :)
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Yeah, I know. Maybe I will do horror version later. If you have a minute, I just added an animation at the bottom. Do you mind checking it out? Does this make up for the twist? ;)
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Ah! Creepy!
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She’s the one I’m playing tag with. Don’t want to be “it” in that game ;)
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Lol I love it Trent 💜
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Thanks!
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