Midnight adventure
To exhume the ancient crypt
But we are too late
The slab is already moved
The dead has unearthed himself
Did we delve too deep
Awaken that which should sleep
Release the terror?
We run from the open tomb
But once more we are too late
The crunch of a twig
Silver shadow from the moon
He is following
A hand grabs me from behind
Sharp nails gouge into my flesh
Leave the dead alone
Sleeping under the cold ground
Peaceful undisturbed
It is a lesson I learned
Only when it was too late
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This was written for Colleen’s Weekly Poetry Challenge. She gives us two key words, but we must use synonyms. This week’s words were Dig and Grave. (I so much wanted to find a way to say “Dig this” or “Do you dig” ;) ). I did a tanka these week. OK, I wrote a story made from four connected tankas this week :)
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creepy vivid Trent.
Well done.
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Thanks, Gary.
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Oooh! I enjoyed your Tanka story––so creepy! It made my skin crawl. Loved it. ;) xo
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Thanks Vashti! Glad you like my little Tanka story
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This poem deserves the advice I got from Scary Movie 3: “RUNNNN!!!”
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lol, exactly.
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Loved it. It turned out to be a wonderful piece!
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Thanks!
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excellent (K)
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Thanks
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Nice :)
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Thanks, Sue :)
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This turned out fabulously, Trent! I love the Taka and the photo. 🎃👻
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Thanks, Colleen! As you said, those well photos came in useful :)
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I loved what you did!
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Thanks, Colleen :)
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Spooky Halloween tale. Well done.
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Thanks :)
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A great way to tell us a story 🦇🦇🦇🦇
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Thanks, Willow!
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💜🦇🌹
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This is a great poem, Trent. Well done.
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Thanks, Robbie.
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Nice!!!
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Thanks!
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Perfect poetry for the photo and the season.
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Thanks, Violet.
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