25 thoughts on “Reality Slips Away #haiku”

1. Colleen M. Chesebro November 10, 2019 at 2:11 pm

   Trent, what a lovely Haiku trio. I like how you wrote in the moment here with your image. Great photography too! <3

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   1. trentpmcd Post authorNovember 10, 2019 at 4:18 pm

      Thanks, Colleen! As you guessed, I picked the photo first :) One I took last week on Cape Cod.

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      1. Colleen M. Chesebro November 10, 2019 at 4:29 pm

         Fabulous! Nothing wrong from getting your inspiration from nature. :D

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2. purplepeninportland November 9, 2019 at 8:55 pm

   Lovely haiku!

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3. tracikenworth November 6, 2019 at 4:13 pm

   Reblogged this on Where Genres Collide Traci Kenworth YA Author & Book Blogger.

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   1. trentpmcd Post authorNovember 6, 2019 at 6:56 pm

      Thanks.

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4. Writing Sparkle November 5, 2019 at 6:10 pm

   I like the line, “Water slips to sleep.” Actually I love the whole piece; nicely written.

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   1. trentpmcd Post authorNovember 5, 2019 at 7:08 pm

      Thanks. I think I tried a dozen variations of that line before I hit on using “slips” as the verb.

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5. Prior... November 5, 2019 at 2:46 pm

   I really loved the last two lines the most – but all good leading up to that

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6. Sagittarius Viking November 5, 2019 at 1:30 pm

   Your Haiku is great, and with that scene yes :)

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   1. trentpmcd Post authorNovember 5, 2019 at 3:00 pm

      Thanks, Maria :)

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7. lifewithlane14 November 5, 2019 at 12:12 pm

   I love ❤🌻🦋

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8. willowdot21 November 5, 2019 at 11:53 am

   Beautiful Trent 💜

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   1. trentpmcd Post authorNovember 5, 2019 at 12:32 pm

      Thanks, Willow :)

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      1. willowdot21 November 5, 2019 at 1:43 pm

         💜🥴

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9. robertawrites235681907 November 5, 2019 at 11:44 am

   VEry nicely written, Trent.

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   1. trentpmcd Post authorNovember 5, 2019 at 12:32 pm

      Thanks, Robbie.

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10. House of Heart November 5, 2019 at 11:28 am

    Suck beautiful ku’s….together they make a beautiful poetry as well.

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    1. trentpmcd Post authorNovember 5, 2019 at 12:32 pm

       Thanks. I was thinking of the three as a set so nice to know they work well together :)

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       1. House of Heart November 5, 2019 at 1:05 pm

          They are perfect!

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          1. trentpmcd Post authorNovember 5, 2019 at 1:39 pm

             Thanks!

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11. forgottenmeadows November 5, 2019 at 9:31 am

    beautiful!

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    1. trentpmcd Post authorNovember 5, 2019 at 9:40 am

       Thanks, Neha!

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12. Penny Wilson Writes November 5, 2019 at 9:29 am

    lovely! <3

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    1. trentpmcd Post authorNovember 5, 2019 at 9:39 am

       Thanks, Penny :)

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