
PHOTO PROMPT © J Hardy Carroll
Day 732 – I spent my day off in the 2nd greenhouse, the tropical garden. I breathed in lungful after lungful of fresh, moist clean air. The green was calming and the flowers beautiful. I felt great as the worries of the day faded. I thought about home. The sky was deceptively blue.
Day 734 – I am told that the sky is orange as the latest storm hits. We had hoped that worst of the chemicals would have condensated out, but we were wrong.
Day 739 – A broken pane let outside air into 2nd greenhouse at a total loss of life.
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Word count = 100
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It makes you think. Is this what it will be like as planet Earth slowly burning up. Will we all be confined to small groups in artificial Biospheres?
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Sometimes I think we will… After I posted this I read that smog in several European cities are above safe levels of smog, and, of course, I got the idea of orange skies from an article I read about cities down wind from the Australian fires…
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I’m hoping this is a colonist on Mars but I fear not.
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Nope, the sky isn’t orange because of a Martian dust storm…
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Scary world we are living in. Oh for a genuinely blissful ignorance!
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After I wrote this I read that many cities in Europe are having some of the worst smog problems they’ve ever experienced. I was thinking of today, but didn’t realize how close I was!
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It sure does make a person think! Nicely done!
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Thanks!
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Very dramatically done in just a few short journal entires. Good one!
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Thanks!
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To think we’re only here until the bubble bursts is a worrying thought indeed.
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And it seems like a lot of people are hammering on that bubble with all of their might! Hopefully we can restrain them a bit some day…
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I’m hoping it doesn’t come to this! Well written Trent!
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Me too – I hope we “smarten up” before it gets anywhere near as bad. Thanks.
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Dear Trent,
Disturbingly well done. My question is, if there was a total loss of life, who’s keeping the log. AI?
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks, Rochelle. Good question. the answer is that each segment of the colony has airlocks between. So when the panel on the greenhouse broke, only that greenhouse was effected, the rest of the colony, including other greenhouse, perhaps some with food.
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Life is fragile. We just don’t realize it yet. Excellent imagining of what might be sooner than we think…
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Life is very fragile, but humans are short-sighted and too often greedy… I hope this never comes to pass, but looking at the world today, I fear it may be too soon, if it hasn’t already started.
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So funny, I was reading yours as my notification came in that you liked mine! Spooky,
As is your story… I worried about the glass breaking – and then you proved me right.
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It is funny, and things like that have happened to me a few times on the blogs. And I “accidentally” read yours at that time – I try to read the FF stories off of the link page in order, but hit yours going down my Reader and clicked in just seeing your name, not the picture.
Unfortunately it looks like the “glass” protecting our world is slowly breaking as well… I hope we can heal it before it ends up like the story….
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Haha! I do that, too. Read off the grid in order (skipping over the “non-participators”)
It is most unfortunate…
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Scary!
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Looking at the news, I think it may be too close to reality…
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That’s what makes it more scary.
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Yeah. I was thinking of photos that I saw from hundreds of miles from the Australian fires when I wrote about the orange skies… It is scary.
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Very very sad and unfortunate.
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yes.
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🔥
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When will this all be fact? Not long I fear 💜
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I have the same fears… Hopefully it will be a long way out or, better yet, never.
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Fingers crossed 💜
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A dark metaphor that looks more and more like real life.
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I saw some pictures of orange skies many hundreds of miles from Australia’s fires, yet the noonday sky was a dark orange… Too close to present day!
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Oooh, this is very dark, Trent. Well done.
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Thanks, Robbie. After my totally silly story yesterday, I felt a need to go towards the dark side…
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Gotta try for Martian bubbles.
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Those Martian dust storms are awful, but perhaps future Earth storms are worse ;)
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Reminds me of “Wall-E.”
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Something like that, but a few of the humans were left behind under a bubble as the cleanup progressed…
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Seems like the weather is rubbish all over!
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Tornadoes, wildfires, unpredictable rain, unbreathable air in many cities – yeah pretty bad, and if certain unmentionable politicians get their way, I think we will all need to live in little bubbles in the not too distant future…
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