
Photo by Sue Vincent
“I have tried to understand…” There were tears at the edge of his eyes.
She kept her face as impassive as possible, still as stone. “Have you?” She crossed her arms.
“If you ask, perhaps not. My failing. I just thought… I felt… You…” His head dropped; he broke the eye contact.
“I assume you are moving on then?”
He raised his glaze, locked his eyes on hers once again.
“That seems to be your wish.”
She nodded once.
He shook his head. “If only you would show some emotion, anything; anger, sadness, joy that I’m leaving; anything.”
She just stared, her face as emotionless as the door.
“Fine. Goodbye.” He turned, looked at the door for a second, and then left.
It was a relief when door closed. He was close to discovering her secret.
She had long ago closed her heart, locked it up and threw away the key. He thought that he could reach her, find her, but the days for that were over long ago, when…
She regained her composure, her secret safe once again. She grabbed her jacket and headed for the door.
Dinner out was in order.
She checked that thought and smiled.
Dinner out alone was in order.
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This was written for Sue Vincent’s writephoto challenge. The photo at the top is Sue’s and she also provided the key word “Secret”.
Intriguing…
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Thanks :)
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Oh how many people live or try to, with closed and locked hearts!
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There are too many that do live with those locked hearts. Hopefully they don’t all have a terrible story behind it as I implied this woman had…
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Whats the secret? Whats the secret!
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I don’t know, she wouldn’t say ;)
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A compelling read, Trent.
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Thanks, Robbie. This was very rushed (I was between meetings when I wrote it) so I’m glad it came across.
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Great story for the cool heart lock photo. Hope you will join the Fake Flamenco tanka contest this weekend!
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Thanks. I will have to drop by and see what it is about – if I have time I might :)
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Oh now, that leaves a real mystery behind ;)
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Yep, and her secret may just stay there, locked away in the past, her heart locked from any emotion forever ;)
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This leaves a lot of questions Trent! Are we getting more of this story?
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Just a slight taste of their stories… but, no, most likely I’ll just keep you guessing what happened in her past to make her like that. (But I never say never ;) )
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Hopefully you’ll write more about these characters.
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Thanks. Maybe – my stories for Sue’s prompts seem to end up novellas or novels…
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She provides great inspiration
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She does
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👍
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