Days of glory passed
Wistful glances at the glow
The past painted gold
Finding the faded sunlight
Still shining, still beautiful
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This was written for Colleen’s Weekly Poetry Challenge. This week was poet’s choice. I chose to do a tanka.
Days of glory passed
Wistful glances at the glow
The past painted gold
Finding the faded sunlight
Still shining, still beautiful
***
This was written for Colleen’s Weekly Poetry Challenge. This week was poet’s choice. I chose to do a tanka.
Nice poem, but love the photo! Very cool :)
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Thanks!
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lovely Trent.. love still shining, still beautiful.
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Thanks.There can be a lot of beauty in those sunsets.
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Lovely photo and tanka to accompany! I love “the past painted gold…” like it is so precious. Beautiful imagery! <3
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Thanks, Colleen. Another one where the image inspires the imagery :)
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I love when that happens! 🥰
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Me too :)
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So Beautiful and thoughtful
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Thanks
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.. always in the eyes of the beholder. Lovely!
Pat
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.. always in the eyes of the beholder. Lovely!
Pat
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Thanks!
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Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #8: Trent’s latest #tanka for Colleen’s #weekly #tanka #poetry #challenge!
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Beautiful and I love that photo!!
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Thanks! This is one where I started with the photo and wrote the poem to fit :)
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Beautiful–the words and the image.
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Thanks :) This is another where I started with the photo and wrote the poem.
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You’re welcome :) Yes, there are times when the image or photo inspires the story/poem.
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Beautifully penned! Aging gracefully…
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Thanks! I hope I am aging gracefully, though I often fight it, tooth and nail ;)
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Pleasing!
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Thanks :)
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That is lovely!
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Thanks!
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