A hint on your lips
Lost in your complexity
A diagram, please
I need to know the way in
Some directions to your heart
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This was written for Colleen’s Poetry Challenge. This week we worked with a theme, maps. I didn’t use the word “map” or “maps” in the body of the poem, which is a tanks.
Very nice. Love the drawing as well.
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Thanks :)
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Like this turn!
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Nice take on the challenge, Trent. :)
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Thanks.
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Marvelous
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Cheers
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Brilliant, Trent! A map to her heart. I like this! <3
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I don’t know why the first thing I thought of was a map to her heart, but, there it is :) Thanks!
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I like that! It’s a solid plan!
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I try to always follow my first instinct :)
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That’s good, Trent. I do the same thing. :D
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I like the poem with the drawing. Nice combination. You write good tankas.
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Thanks, Rebecca! It’s a form I enjoy :)
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