19 thoughts on “Beware #haiku or #senryu

  1. Colleen M. Chesebro

    Very nice haiku, Trent. The last line was a good surprise and totally unexpected! My favorite way of remembering if it’s a haiku or senryu is: haiku are written about nature, and senryu are written about human nature and the human condition. This moving stuff is exhausting! <3

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    1. trentpmcd Post author

      Thanks, Colleen. Of course this could be a metaphor about some people, and that last line having some bite ;) I’m sure moving across the country is exhausting. I hope you are enjoying the cold weather!

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