
She is listening
When the tree falls in the woods
One is there to hear
Nature sees through smoke and snow
Can life ever be alone?
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This was written for Colleen’s Weekly Poetry Challenge. This week the challenge was an image which we were to write an Ekphrastic poem (a poem that explores art). The poem at the top of the page was provided by D.L. (Denise) Finn. I wrote a tanka.
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We are all part of and separate from each other. Life is so fascinating. Lovely thoughtful poem Trent.
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We seem so alone so often, and yet there is no escaping being part of this larger thing called life. Thanks :)
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Beautiful
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Trent… you went all philosophical! I love it! I was just thinking about this the other day… we’re all basically alone, aren’t we, on different paths and journeys? Yet, somehow we’re all interconnected. That’s the magic, I think. <3
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Thanks! Yes, a bit philosophical today. I hope you don’t mind a repeat comment, but earlier I said to Susan: In ways we are always alone – we can reach out, touch and communicate, yet our essence in our mind is separate. On the other hand, there is a web of life and we are all connected, part of a unified thing called “life”. In that way, unless we are on a space station or separated from the planet, we are always part of it and never truly alone.
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How true, Trent. Yet the mind can separate itself into aloneness and a state of just being thru meditation. That connection you speak of is what makes us human, I think. We need that connection for survival. The pandemic has shown us that aspect of being human.
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We are social animals…
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I’m pretty introverted so the lockdown hasn’t bothered us much. I do miss getting out and doing a few things, for sure. <3
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I’m an ultra-introvert, but it has been nice to bump into (certain) people during my walks through town and chatting at socially acceptable distances ;)
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I totally get that! 🥰
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This is a very interesting poem, Trent. Well done.
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Thanks, Robbie.
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Absolutely beautiful 🌹🌹
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Thanks, Willow!
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I like your play on an old phrase. Yes, life is connected.
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Thanks, Chel. There is this greater web of life and we are all interconnected, from the smallest microbe to the largest whale.
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🎶 In the cirrrrrrcle…. the circle of liiiife
But, yes, for real.
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lol, yep, the Lion King folk got the idea for the song from somewhere ;)
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What a beautiful verse! Your question has me in full ponder mode. I wonder if all life is actually alone? Separate journeys all. My head will surely hurt playing with this idea all day! lol
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In ways we are always alone – we can reach out, touch and communicate, yet our essence in our mind is separate. On the other hand, there is a web of life and we are all connected, part of a unified thing called “life”. In that way, unless we are on a space station or separated from the planet, we are always part of it and never truly alone.
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