
Freder splashed his way through the stench of the workers’ subterranean street. Fresh from his pleasure garden two thousand feet above the ground, he felt suffocated being as far below that long-lost surface.
He never knew that the masses lived like this! Perhaps H. G. Wells was prophetic and humans were splitting into the leisure-class Eloi and working-class Morlocks.
Did his father know what the rule of his 1% did to those 99% who created that lavish lifestyle in the clouds?
He would find Maria, join he people.
“The Mediator Between the Head and the Hands Must Be the Heart.”
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word count = 100
Friday Fictioneers is hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. This week’s prompt is here and uses a photo © Anne Higa. Read more or join in by following the InLinkz “linky“.
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The photo made me think of an underground city, or a city’s underground. A poor area with the upper-class’ sewage running unchecked into the poor’s domain. Which led me to the movie Metropolis. Freder is the main character of the movie, with Maria the female lead. His father is the head of the elites and runs the city. She is from the poor worker’s city and is trying to find a way for the rich Capitalists and the poor Workers to get together. The last line of the story is the last line of the movie.
I love that last line.
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It is a great line and summed up the movie perfectly, which is why I stole it for this ;)
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Great choice of inspiration. The 99 and 1% is just a little too close to reality, huh?
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pretty close to today, and if we keep going the way we are…
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I like how you did this, Trent. I haven’t seen Metropolis but you’ve given me a good idea!
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Thanks, Dale. It’s a great movie, one of the all time classic silent movies. And it has perhaps the best robot ever filmed…
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I dunno why it never landed in my radar :)
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There was a version set to rock music in the 80s which is how I first learned about it.
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That’s what comes to mind when I hear Metropolis… still didn’t see it!
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I had a version on VHS, but it wasn’t that one – I thought it was when I bought it and was disappointed, but after a few watches, I still loved it. I did see the rock one once, but I don’t remember when or who I was with…
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All too relevant! I like the positive feel to the ending. I’ll have to check out the film one of these days. 🌷
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It is a great movie, perhaps the first full length sci-fi movie ever, though be prepared for a silent movie…
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Sounds intriguing!
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It is interesting
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Intriguing take. I have Metropolis in my watchlist. I know it’s supposed to be great. I just have to find the right time when I’m focused enough to watch a two-and-a-half-hour silent movie. I haven’t watched many silent movies that didn’t star Charlie Chaplin.
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There was a version from back in the 80s that used a lot of current pop and rock stars as the sound track. It’s only about 90 minutes, so a great introduction (It is the version I first saw).
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I didn’t know that. I’ll have to look for that one.
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It was a pet project of composer/producer Giorgio Moroder, who is better known for his work with disco (think the synth background to Donna Summer’s “I Feel Love”). He got a lot of big names, like Freddie Mercury and Pat Benatar to perform on the soundtrack.
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I haven’t seen that movie, but this did remind me of the episode of StarTrek that featured the city in the clouds, and the trogolites who worked in the mines. Great story.
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It was perhaps the first full length sci-fi movie ever, and had what is still one of the greatest robots ever. I’m sure Gene Roddenberry knew it when he wrote that Star Trek episode. thanks :)
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I’ll troll around for it.
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Now, I see what you saw. A world for the underprivileged underground, below those who live in the sunshine. I didn’t see it before. Great job, Trent!
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Those living in the underbelly of the city – Thanks, Brenda, glad you liked it!
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Dear Trent,
I hope this isn’t prophetic. Nothing like fan fiction to stimulate the imagination. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks, Rochelle. I don’t do fan fiction often, but this one called out for it (in my opinion).
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Note to self: must watch Metropolis.
There is so much in this story that I love. And the comparison with Time Machine is very apt.
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I need to watch it as well – it has been years (I had a VHS copy ;) ). Thanks.
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You made the best of a difficult to grok photo.
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Thanks! It is such an odd picture – I hope Anne tells us the story behind it!
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You’re welcome. It’s amazing the creativity that was inspired with it! I think Anne talked about it in a previous post but I don’t remember what she said it was.
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This reads like a good start to a book Trent.💜💜💜
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Thanks, Willow. or a good (silent) movie ;) Maybe I need to modernize that old classic.
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Yes maybe you do 😑
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Great connection with the “Metropolis” and well written too. Ah, that last line…
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I don’t know the movie, but I’ll look out for it.
It’s frightening how history and fantasy always seem to come back to the basic injustice between the few who have and the many who have not. Will we ever learn? I really like this piece. And the hope because the protagonist is going to take action.
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The movie is one of the classics of the silent film era and has perhaps the greatest robot on film (CP3O from Star Wars is based on “her”). We do seem to learn and even the playing field a little to give all a chance, but it seems that we we are back to that huge gulf between the haves and have-nots. Thanks – I do always like a little hope :)
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This reads like a metaphor for today’s world, with a few obscenely rich, millions at starvation levels, and one or two brave hearts trying futilely to bridge the gap.
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Thanks – although I was basing it on a movie that is almost a century old, I was thinking very much of today.
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A clever take on the prompt. Any story including HG Wells is a winner well done.
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Thanks. I’m sure the original movie had to have been influenced by H. G. Wells.
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I believe so.
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Love that movie, may have to give it a re-watch soon. Like how you incorporated it into the story from the prompt.
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Thanks, Iain. I haven’t seen the movie and ages and need to do a re-watch as well.
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It’s very well written and feels relatable.
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Thanks.
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Well done, Trent. Hopefully, your hero is more effective than the soldier in War of the Worlds. Mind you, he was trying to create the underground city.
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Thanks, Robbie. If I am going strictly by the movie Metropolis, he is very successful – not only does he save the works’ children, kills the bad guy, and in the end he does bridge the two worlds so they can live in accord.
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I got the Metropolis vibe
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Thanks.
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