
Blinders keep us focused on our “now”
Only living for the moment
We move mindlessly forward
Harm gone unrecognized
Impact unnoticed
Neglect unseen
Greed unchecked
Selfish
Now
Gone
Future
Sands creep in
No going back
Relentless changes
Damage accumulates
Once pure is now decrepit
If we could see, could we change it?
Or is it too late to turn back time?
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This was written for Colleen’s weekly poetry challenge. This week was an Ekphrastic, that is, we needed to create a poem that explores a piece of art. Anita Dawes, who won last month’s Ekphrastic challenge, chose the image at the top, an image by mollyroselee from Pixabay. I chose to do a double nonet.
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OK, not so subtle about our environmental impact ;) But Earth Day is almost here!
Great interpretation of the image… and lovely flow to the words Trent.
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Thanks.
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Brilliant double-inverted nonet, Trent. When we traveled cross-country in January, I saw similar scenes of abandonment and desolation in Texas. It was striking! You nailed it! <3
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Thanks, Colleen! I thought the rhythm of this form suited the topic to the tee. Glad you enjoyed it :)
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You should work with these longer forms more often. This is wonderful! <3
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Thanks. I’ll admit, most of the time I do the challenges I take a few minutes out of work to do them, so don’t have enough time for a longer form. I do like when I take the time :)
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This was really fabulous! <3
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:)
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Awesome thought provoking writing.
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I live the feel of this poem Trent 💜
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Thanks, Willow :) I think the rhythm of the form helps here.
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Yes indeed and the nonet is one of my favourite forms of poetry. 💜
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That picture is stunning and your double nonnet is perfect for it!
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Thanks, Dale! Yeah, the picture is pretty cool – someone is obviously very good with Photoshop.
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Yes. I have nothing against playing with filters and effects in the name of art :)
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If the outcome is this, neither do I!
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I definitely put this into the art category :)
And don’t forget, your ekphrastic double nonnet did it justice!
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Very much the art category.
Thanks! :) An Earth Day special.
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Beauty all around!
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yes
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Very reflective.
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You are welcome.
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