
We were lost and tired.
The cockpit crew died when our transport was shot down over the empty jungle. They were the only ones who knew where we were and which way we needed to go.
But we had to move.
Have you ever walked for days in a sticky oven with no food? How about knowing a sniper could be in any tree, a boobytrap on any path?
We approached the ratty house, arms drawn.
No luck.
It had been empty for decades. Not a scrap to eat.
But we found a sign – Ashtabula.
Port Cleveland wasn’t too far!
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word count = 100
Friday Fictioneers is hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. This week’s prompt is here and uses a photo © Alicia Jamtaas . Read more or join in by following the InLinkz “Linky“.
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Ashtabula is a town in Ohio, a bit east of Cleveland. I wanted to say “Akron”, but the punchline would have been softened. I like the sound of “Ashtabula” better – it was used in A Bob Dylan song, “You’ll Make Me Lonely When You Go”. With the title and jungle warfare, I wanted people to think Vietnam, not Ohio ;)
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I was super busy last week and didn’t read many FF posts. Hopefully I’ll get to more this week.
“With the title and jungle warfare, I wanted people to think Vietnam, not Ohio ;)” That certainly worked for me! Well done.
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Obviously Ohio a few years down the road after a bit of global warming and far fewer people, but… Thanks!
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Sounds like a rather tense situation! Great take
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Thanks!
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Great response to the photo prompt. The picture itself creates a feeling of urgency which you also capture in your 100 words. Thanks for sharing.
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Thanks!
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Nice
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Thanks.
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Eerie suspense cool
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Thanks. trying to squeeze a lot into those 100 words..
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Prophetic indeed! Well done.
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Thanks, Susan!
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Unlucky to crash in the wilds.
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Yes it is, particularly if “the enemy” holds the wilds…
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Dear Trent,
Chillingly believable. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks, Rochelle.
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In “home” territory, yet still in danger. Nice one!
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In a much changed world… maybe. Thanks.
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Ohio! Hah! Here I was expecting something like Vietnam…
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Ohio in a future after global warming when it is a jungle and desolate ;) Yep, that is just what I wanted you to think… (I’m flying into that barren wasteland “Ohio” in a couple of weeks to visit family)
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Ah haha! :D
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Very intense. I want to know more 😁. Great post. KL ❤️
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Thanks, KL!
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I certainly wasn’t thinking of Ohio (being from Ohio myself). Nice misdirect, and I’m with you, Ashtabula has a much nicer ring than Akron.
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I grew up in Ohio and will be there over the 4th, so I guess Ohio was on my mind. I’m from a bit west of Cleveland, though, not east. Thanks.
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So many good details to draw the reader into a godforsaken environment. Then finding the sign! You were the puppetmaster of emotions with this story.
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Thanks! Good to know i could set up that 100-word roller coaster.
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You’re welcome!
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Very tense, a horrible situation to be in. Good tale.
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Lost in a situation like that is never good. Thanks.
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No kidding. you;re welcome!
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Great drop into a scene, understood the tension and suspense and exhaled finally when hope was realized.
All packed into 100 words.
Excellent Trent.
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Thanks, Gary, I’m glad you liked it.
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Very good Trent and possible 💜
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Thanks, Willow. Maybe distant future (the area concerned is not currently jungle), but a large scale rebellion? Looks more likely every day…
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Scary!
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Sounds like they may have been shot down by their own side. This too happens in war
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It is possible. I was thinking a situation where the jungles are held by the rebels or revolutionaries while the cities were held by “mainstream” or conventional forces, a situation like Vietnam.
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Love how you wrote this and I was not expecting Ohio at all, which is more humorous when I read your after-note. Great writing. 😁
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Thanks! I’m glad that bit of misdirection worked :)
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