
vision
colorful starfish, golden pearls
carefully placed random
sand and seashells
display
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This was written for Colleens weekly poetry challenge. This week was to be an Ekphrastic based on the photo provided by Annette Rochelle Aben. I chose to write cinquo.
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I love your poem so beautifully inspired by the display.
It is derived from the sea and artistically and casually displayed.
Sure the stars have been colour e handed.
I have done seascape displays myself, it is fun.
Miriam
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The person obviously did take some time and thought to make the seascape. Thanks.
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Excellent, Trent. How does the cinquo work?
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Thanks, Colleen. On the site it didn’t say anything about content, just 5 lines as follows: 2-8-6-4-2
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Nice Trent!
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Trent, I thought this form looked familiar. It’s also a reverse cinquain. LOL! <3
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Ah, OK. I read through the list until one syllable scheme jumped out, and that’s what I did :)
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LOL! That’s okay! I knew it was familiar. It was a lovely poem. 😍
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It’s always fun to try something new (to me) :)
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Me too! I think it’s our adventurous spirits. LOL! :D
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Must be :)
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The image captured beautifully, Trent!
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Thanks!
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“carefully placed random” is great! And, no matter how we try, we never can get it to look as random as nature does.
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For some dd reason, no matter how hard we try, you can always tell things were touched by a human. Thanks, glad you enjoyed.
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You captured the image perfectly, Trent. I love the line: “carefully place random.”
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Thanks, Diana. I think that line is the heart of the entire poem.
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I love its sound!
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…the sound of your words! Beautiful, my friend!
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Thanks, Marina, glad you enjoyed :)
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Very much!!!
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Love the vibrancy in your words!
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Thanks!
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Nicely done Trent 💜
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Thanks, Willow :)
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💜
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