
The sign said “Antiques”, but Andy had developed an eye to be able to tell if “Antiques” meant “Queen Anne and Money” or “Cheap Junk”. This store was the latter.
Andy had also developed an eye for finding those hidden gems. Josh had joked that it was in his genes.
It was also necessity.
Furnishing and decorating an apartment on $7.50 an hour was tough. And it had to be nice so Josh would continue to stop by.
He did need Josh to stop by.
Andy fingered a lamp.
Finding out about Josh was why Andy’s parents kicked him out.
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word count = 100
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A lovely piece, Trent. I enjoyed the shift from something seemingly mundane to something far more deep. Well done.
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Thanks, Heather.
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Well done. That last line was a gut punch. I’ll never understand how parents can be so cruel.
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Thanks. I know, it totally blows my mind that there are parents that can do that type of thing. I will never be able to understand it.
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Well done, Trent. You folded the prompt into a wonderful story,
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Thanks, Bill.
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A lot of story in 100 words. Nicely done.
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Thanks.
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Shops like these are both daunting and tantalizing. I liked the way you cleverly introduced the bigger story that this flash fiction could be, Trent. Well done.
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Thanks. I used to go into those types of shops pretty often, but now I need to get rid of junk, not bring more in. I agree, they can be intimidating, and it is hard to see individual items over the clutter and I don’t have the advantage of having that gene for perfect style – I had to use that cliché in to introduce the real story.
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I do need to get rid of more nicknacks too – moving house definitely helped cull the clutter.
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I’m still outraged by the pathetically low pay. How can people
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live like that? Gem hunting…
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I agree, it is far too little for anyone to live on! Have to find those gems, in the store and in life.
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A lot going on in this piece. Well done.
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Thanks.
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What gets me is that he NEEDed Josh to stop by…. Implying that Josh, himself, didn’t feel the need as strongly, despite Andy having lost so much on his behalf. I think we’ve all been there before. I also think I’ve been in that store before, the picture triggered a scent memory! 😬 Great piece! You have a wonderful talent for telling an entire story in only 100 words! That’s hard to do!
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Thanks, Shannon! Actually, it is a great point about “need”. I was thinking more that Josh was more than content, but Andy was very insecure and vulnerable, so had that need of stability in his relationship to Josh. Hmm, I guess it is sort of the same thing – Andy wasn’t sure if Josh felt that need as strongly, and the story is in Andy’s POV, even if 3rd person. Anyway, one thing I love about fiction like this is that it can be like poetry and everyone can have a different interpretation of the same few words :)
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So true! Everyone interprets things based on their own life experience, which is what makes fiction so special.
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I like the layers in this very much, Trent. Very insightful writing!
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Thanks, Lisa!
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You’re welcome.
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A harsh reality. I hope these two manage to stay together, if that’s what they both desire.
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Yes, starting is difficult for everyone, and doubly so for someone not expecting to be starting off on his own so soon… Hopefully they do, since at this point in the game they do seem willing to sacrifice for each other.
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I wonder how long Josh can keep supplying those hidden gems?
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Hopefully at least until the Andy completely lands on his own two feet.
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Beauty is in the eye of the beholder, I’d happily have that potty beneath my bed!
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Beauty is in the eye of the beholder, and I guess a corollary of that statement is that what catches an eye may differ from beholder to beholder – I’m not sure if I’d be as happy ;)
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Well told with a good twist at the end. I was in a shop just like this one last June while on holiday. It’s a search for any gems, for sure.
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Thanks. I used to frequent a few shops like this one and finding those gems was almost impossible, but on a rare occasion…
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Yes, it can be the needle in a haystack.
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I will never now be able to look in a junk shop in the same way. 🙂
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Everybody sees something different in those stores…
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A nice step by step lead in to the point of Andy’s musing about the quality of junk at the shop.
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Thanks.
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Picking the treasure from the trash… good ending line.
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Yes, exactly. Thanks.
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I’ve never quite understood how junk shops may money, but apparently they do. Unless it’s all a front for something else, of course.
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I used to hit a few so called antique stores and was surprised at how little the inventory changed, and when something disappeared, it usually showed up at another shop! I’m with you, I wonder what they are selling in those back rooms… I guess best I never found out.
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Oh my……….the best treasures are often buried deep 😬
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They are usually buried pretty deep, and I say good luck to anyone finding a gem in that shop…
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Dear Trent,
Believe me, one would have to dig deep for buried treasure in that shop. It was unbelievable! I like the way you gently fleshed out what your story was really about. Andy’s love for Josh. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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I’ve been in some junk shops like that… Those gems must be hidden really well, because I never saw them ;) Yes, it is more about Andy’s love for Josh. Thanks.
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