
I sat in the café eating the food I once hated without thinking about it. The roar of a streetcar that once made me jump went by unnoticed.
The two letters lay open on the table. The illegible tear-soften words of the one were long memorized while the crisp newly inked words of the other still held surprises.
The waitress came over. Her once foreign words asking if I was finished were now in my tongue, which I used to answer.
I watched out the window.
Sunday was New Year’s Day.
Monday, after a year’s exile, I was going home.
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word count = 100
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Sounds like he’s had quite a year – and a lot to show for it!
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I think so, though I also think in ways he was ready to go home.
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He seems to have adjusted to the different culture/location. I wonder if he will stay at “home” once he returns? Lots of wondering every which-way here. I’d like to see a part 2 to this one :)
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He has changed a lot in that year, so home may not live up to his expectations. But, then, there is that5 “where the heart is” definition, so maybe he will be fine.
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New year new start, great atmosphere (my story was kind of the opposite to yours) :)
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I seem to either go very dark or very optimistic in my FF stories, so I can imagine being very different. I don’t remember seeing your story – is it in the link-up? (I’ll go try to find it in a minute).
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Hi yes it’s there but I didn’t post it until late on 😄
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Something about a new year and going home is very powerful. Nice piece.
Happy New Year, Trent. Cheers to another great year of writing!
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Thanks, Shari, glad you liked it. Happy New Year – hope you have a wonderful writing year :)
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Thank you Trent. A very emotionally charged poem. Wishing you all the best for the coming year.
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Thanks. You too, have a great 2023.
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One wonders, of course, how his return home is going to be received!
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Always a risk. Also, he obviously has changed. Will he feel the same about being home? Oh well, for now it is best to look at the bright side and all of the possibilities.
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Very interesting Trent 💜💜💜
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Thanks, Willow :)
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Happy New Year 💜💜
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Happy New Year!
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Thank you 💜💜
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Interesting story of change and transition. The hopeful ending is encouraging. Nicely done, Trent.
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I think this is a case where goign home to a new beginning is a good thing. Thanks.
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New beginnings are strong this time of year. I hope the new start is good for. him.
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A change in the calendar does seem to create a change in the attitude. I guess it is nice to have a time each year to reflect on the past and plan for the future.
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Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you.
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Dear Trent,
Hopefully it will be a joyful homecoming. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Agreed, hopefully it will be joyful.
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Thanks :)
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This speaks to me of all those who are displaced this year… looking for refuge, family… Home! Great story. Happy New Year!
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Thanks, Bear. Too many are displaced for what ever reason. Happy New Year!
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The displacement and relief is so well described. I hope his home still fees like home when he gets back.
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It will never be the same, but perhaps that new beginning at home is better than returning to the same-ol’-same-ol’.
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Going home again in a displaced world can only be joy, a New Years gift, so to speak.
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Yes, I think it is a great New Years gift for the MC in this story.
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To home and face the conversation. The compliments of the season to you Trent
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Yep, but hopefully good conversation that he has missed…
Thanks. Happy holidays.
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Poignant story, Trent
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Thanks, Neil.
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