
125 years ago, the room was filled with Vanderbilts, Carnegies and Rockefellers. Now it’s a top restaurant.
I looked forward to meeting my future in-laws there.
The jeans were out of place, as were the comments about the chandelier of broken dishes. The loud laughter at the sommelier was more embarrassing than them using the wrong forks, as was their pointing at the French Ambassador’s wife’s hat.
When the manager approached, I thought he’d ask us to leave.
To my surprise, he knew Tina’s parents by name.
As we left, “Pops” said, “Next time I’ll take you some place nice.”
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word count = 100
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While reading, I immediately thought of Larry McMurtry wearing jeans to the Oscars (where he won). Humans can be such an interesting lot. :-)
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Humans are interesting. There is a fine line between bucking the establishment and being rude. I think Larry McMurtry was on the positive side of that line, but I am not too sure about the in-laws here…
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I think Larry hoped to turn a sow’s ear in a silk purse. :-)
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I would have crawled under the table to hide if I were dining with them. Good take.
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lol, I might have crawled under the table as well, or at the very least turned 20 shades of red… Thanks.
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I loved the ending. You never know is my motto. :)
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Thanks. Keep an open mind is mine, which is very similar and has a lot of overlap…
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Great twist Trent. Hope the in-laws place is more comfortable for him in the long run….
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Thanks. No knowing where the journey with the in-laws will lead, but it won’t be boring…
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This is a great write Trent. Congratulations! You said a lot with a few words.
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Thanks, Resa.
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Well done. I hesitate to wonder what he thinks is nice.
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lol, I know. I am sure the main character (son-in0law) is nervous… Thanks.
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This was a fun read, Trent :)
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Thanks! 😊
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Haha love it still smiling here :)
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Thanks!
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Perhaps Pops was having fun to provoke some reaction. Using the wrong forks, how rebellious.
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Have you seen the original Blues Brothers movie? i wanted to have him using the water glass for wine instead of the forks, but not enough words ;) You are right, Pops may have known exactly what he was doing (like that scene in the Blues Brothers movie…)
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He made a better impression on his in-laws than they made on him, which is probably the better balance for him going forward.
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Agreed, it does put him in the better place.
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An interesting first meeting! It seems to have worked out well though.
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Really enjoyed this!
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Thanks!
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A surprise ending, nicely done.
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Thanks.
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Money don’t make you elegant but it sure gets you into the right doors. Here’s hoping they like their new son-in-law ;-)
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Skilled writing here, Trent.
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Thanks.
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You’re welcome.
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I seem to be in the minority here, but I thought they were just plain rude. Money is no excuse for ill manners.
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I don’t disagree – as “elmowrites” said, it can be seen as people who are at the level of privilege that they can do anything they want, their privilege allows them to be super rude and the people around them can just smile and nod their heads. On the other hand, some people can be a bit stuffy and self-important, and sometimes it can be nice for someone to point out that the emperor has no clothes. Perhaps they are popping other people’s self-important balloons.
(I’m just glad that I wasn’t really there ;) ).
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Haha, you’ve captured the level of privilege that allows one *not* to fit in and still to belong. Sounds like he’s made a decent impression, but I’m not sure how it’ll go in the future.
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Thanks. yes, there is that level of privilege where you can do pretty much anything, which has a good side and a bad side… I think how it goes depends on how much of it Tina has inherited – if she is like her parents, he might find a rocky road ahead!
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Inadvertently, he seems to have created just the right impression. Nice one.
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Yes, he picked the right place, but maybe for the wrong reason. Thanks.
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LOL! Brilliant story. I loved it!
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Thanks, Colleen!
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A rich image delivered quickly.
Very nicely done Trent.
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Thanks, Gary.
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See first assumptions are not always correct, I loved that Trent ! 💜💜💜
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No, they are not :) Thanks!
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Dear Trent,
It sounds like he’s going to do okay with the in-laws. ;)
Shalom,
Rochelle
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It might have worked out a little different than expected, but I do think you’re right, he will get along just fine…
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Good luck to you. This line “The jeans were out of place, as were the comments about the chandelier of broken dishes. ” is classic. Thank you for sharing this, and best wishes.
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Thanks.
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Anytime
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