
The coffeehouse was crowded for a Wednesday.
I eyed the empty mic and stool in a corner under the 20-foot-tall windows.
The hot nightspot was in an ancient, converted mill, as was the rest of the pedestrian-only street. My wife called the music usually heard there “folk for hipsters”. It had hosted nationally known acts.
The lone stool looked so vulnerable, sitting on its own. I walked over to it and offered a few words of comfort to the poor piece of furniture.
I sat, picked up my guitar and said, “I wrote a few songs. I hope you enjoy…”
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word count = 100
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I felt his tension and hesitation. Glad he overcame it and gave it a go! Nicely done, Trent. :)
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Displacing that nervousness to an inanimate object helps free him so he can express himself in his songs. Thanks :)
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Brave to let go of his babies. Hope all goes well. Well done.
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It is tough releasing them into the wild world like that, but they do need to be released… Thanks.
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very brave indeed loved how you walked us through the story 💞
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Thanks :)
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Those first steps.
Really nicely put.
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Those first steps are always the hardest. Thanks.
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I wonderful moment of bravery. Oh but that chair could tell stories of those who came before.
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I’m sure there are a million stories it could tell of all the musicians it has (literally) supported. And if it helps a performer psych themselves up to do their best, so much the better.
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Nice! I’m sure they’ll enjoy it. 🙂
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I’m sure they will :) Thanks!
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You put us in the cafe with him, we know his doubts and a little of his back story with the wife’s comment. Great writing in a tiny package.
Tracey
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Thanks, Tracey. It is always fun to sue these micro-fiction stories to create a background, though I think you won the award for creating a back story by inference this week.
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And now I want to hear the music :). A realistic piece, believable and warm.
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Live music at local coffee shop is always nice :) Thanks.
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To begin the journey, first you must take one step. Hope this was that one step.
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He took the first step – let’s hope the journey has begun.
Thanks.
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I have been to a few open-mic nights and enjoyed the impromptu acts, that are always entertaining. The world is full of undiscovered talent as far as the media goes, but normal people are more relaxed and appreciated for their honesty. In my view. i enjoyed reading.
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Open mic night can be a lot of fun, and some of the people who perform are really talented. A great place to get a foot in the door or at least have a little local exposure. I hadn’t really decided if this was an open mic or if this was his first gig as a singer/songwriter. Either way, pretty much the same – the nervousness of a first performance.
Thanks.
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We need to make sure all lonely furniture gets the company it needs. And, of course, music!
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Yes, making that lonely furniture feel welcome is important – or at least it is if you need to project your nervousness to an inanimate object… Yes, of course music helps us all.
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I love how he draws comfort and courage through talking to the stool. I think this is the way many of us draw courage in order to project our writing/songs/whatever.
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Thanks. I think sometimes people projecting their nervousness elsewhere helps. I’m not nervous, it’s the stool, and I’m up here to help.
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Excellent write to the photo, Trent. I’m not sure what that place was before, but it very well could have been a converted mill. I can see you up there in the seat with a guitar.
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Thanks, Lisa. This reminds me of a place I once saw a friend play. That wasn’t an old converted mill, but the photo also reminds me of places that are.
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You’re welcome.
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Most artists rise from humble beginnings. Why not him?
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Exactly. Everyone has to have a first gig.
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The title adds a whole new dimension to the story, Trent. I’m sure the songs were enjoyed by all. A fun piece of writing, my friend.
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Thanks, Diana. I was going to use a similar line in the story, but ran out of words. I think it works better as a title…
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It worked great. I liked that!
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Nice beginning to a (hopefully) longer piece 😀
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Thanks, Paula.
Most likely this will stay a snippet. I was thinking of a movie I saw where the main character is inspired to write a poem. At the end, he is talked into reciting the poem in front of a giant crowd. Right as he is introduced, and before the movie audience has heard the poem, the credits come up. To me it was the perfect ending because the movie was about the poem’s creation, not the poem itself, and anything he said would be disappointing.
Of course, I could get deeper into that end if not restricted by 100 words…
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Nice 🙂
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I hope your character gets to soar – he sounds like a sensitive soul.
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Thanks. yes, I was thinking of a sensitive, and very nervous, person. Hoping those butterflies in his stomach turn into those eagles to make him soar :)
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Well done, Trent. I didn’t even notice the mic
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Thanks. The mic itself is hard to see, but to my eyes it stood out in the reflection in the window.
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Good one. Mercy for the lone piece of furniture. Have a great week, Trent.
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Thanks, Bear. Hopefully the lone piece of furniture shows thanks for that mercy as it will be at the center of attention as the main character gives his first ever public performance under those huge windows…
Have a great week :)
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YEah, hopefully!
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Dear Trent,
I love the atmosphere you created here. It sounds like a place my husband and I would like to frequent. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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The first thing I noticed in the photo was the empty mic and a few people facing it – I have never been to this coffee house, but have been to places just like it. Thanks.
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